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| "Losing, or How the World Continues" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 25, 2006 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent start. I'm not familiar with this anime (I follow your Inuyasha stories) but as you are one of my favorite authors, I'm looking forward to learning something new. Thanks for sharing.
| Title: not bad
Reviewed By: Hikaru-RoseRed2 On: June 21, 2006 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first off i really liked your story so far. mind you i have only read what you have now but i plan on reading more when you post again. I gave you a seven for style of writing mainly because of the format of work. Its a little hard to follow for me, but i know of others that like it better that way. I gave you a nine for spelling and Grammer because i think i noticed one or two errors, no biggy there, everyone makes mistakes. A ten in the Originality and Creativity department. I dont think i have ever read a story with this sort of plot. i actually really like the idea of it, and i can't wait to see how it develops (no one to talk about spelling right hehe 0.0u) anyway A ten again for the Enjoyment factor. I really liked reading your story so far, simple as that. and as and overall rating ten, i could average it out and that would be a nine, but i think a ten works because overall i really liked your story. haha i keep saying i like it but thats just it. i do like it please update again soon. i cant wait to see what happenes next.
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