| "A New Shadow" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow crazed 101 On: March 05, 2007 12:13 CST
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sorry guys i havent updated in so long. I'll get more chapters soon. I'm already working on the sequal! :)
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: TheRealScootTh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo i like it it's funny and Shadow romantic *satrts laughing loudly and rudely* HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA OMG OMGOMGOMGOMG haha ha sorry anyway update...........................................NOW!!!!!! (holds a cheeseboard with strangely a nail in to your head) do it now NOW NOW NOWNOW NOWNOWNOWNOWNOW NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
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Reviewed By: j320 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:20 CDT
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*hoedown* swing yer partner & do-si-do, now you'll up-date new shad-ooooooooow! NOW! *throws chair* now i say!
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Reviewed By: Triple D On: August 20, 2006 14:52 CDT
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HEH your friend can write a great story..espically the first chapter..XDD never knew Shadow would get drunk that bad..and isn't it illegal for a bartender to keep giving a real drunk guy more beer?! XDD
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Reviewed By: Lori-Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 16:32 CDT
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That was pretty funny too. EGGMANS DEAD, YEEEEEEAAAAAAHHHHHH. LOL. Anyway, keep going i wanna see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: j320 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 21:33 CDT
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god this is funny, the last chappy was short but i write short chappys all the time so theres nuttin wrong w/tat. wen r u gonna use my chappy. ARE u gonna use my chappy i wrote specially 4 u?
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 15:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
well once again your friend out did himself keep it up btw star can you kinda hurry up with my fics?
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Reviewed By: Shadow Killer On: July 26, 2006 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, i thought this was a good one, and well i rated on what i've read so i hope it doesn't bother ya.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: craigo On: July 22, 2006 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was great im hoping for a sequel man it would be great too
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Title: great
Reviewed By: craigo On: July 22, 2006 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was great im hoping for a sequel man it would be great too
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Reviewed By: Lori-Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty damn funny. The fighting between Knuckles and Shadow is brill. LMAO. Keep up the good work and you should try explaining to your parents that writing stories will help your creative side and help keep ur grades up. Just a suggestion. lol.
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Reviewed By: jex On: June 28, 2006 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story, please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: nojico On: June 18, 2006 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this shit is so damn funny!
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Title: FUNNY
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 15:15 CDT
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ITS NICE JUST SNEAK A PROFILE AT THE LIBARY OR USE A INTERNET CAFE HEY WHY WONT YOUR PARENTS LET YOU GET ONE ITLS NOT LIKE ITS WELL UMMM A PORNO SITE OH WELL UP DATE SOON LOL
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Reviewed By: Looly On: June 16, 2006 14:01 CDT
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The basic plot is pretty good, but the video @ McDonalds? I mean, no offense or anything, but that's really random. If you're gonna be random, then you have to go all the way. Good luck...
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