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| "A Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie On: June 28, 2006 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dabs eyes with a tissue... gets up and humbly bows. That was truly beautiful Literary Goddess. Really awesome. It was so perfect and so masterfully written. Bittersweet, though it maybe. It was really awesome. I loved the way you also are able to blend the descriptions and the atomsphere of the story together to create these works of art!!! I loved how you made Ann into such a powerful character and presences irregard of the fact it's a short story. You clearly expressed Ann's thoughts and feelings with this story. It was as if we knew her for a long time. Powerful, that is another word I can use to describe this story. Thank you for sharing this with us your readers. It's an honour to read your work. It was sad when Ann didn't mean to break the seashells in her anguish. It felt as though I was with her as she suffered in silence. Upset that no one contacted her then relieved when Ton's parents showed up to help and explain what happened to him. I really enjoyed reading this orginal story that you wrote. It is another example of your wonderous talents and artistry!! You Totally Rock!! Again this is another shining and brillant example of your talents!! Please keep up the most excellent work!! ... PS... perphaps even think of writing a novel or short stories to publish!! I look forward to seeing more of your works in the future.
| Title: Awww
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer NSI On: June 28, 2006 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...that's so sad and moving! I loved this! You really wrote a well descriptive look into Ann's emotions and what she was feeling. It was raw and powerful, and the ending was very moving. I love things that have a dramatic and supernatural accent to them. Great job, m'deer!
| Title: So sad...
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 23:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
So very sad, and beautiful. Reminds me of the film "Truly, Madly, Deeply". I loved the seashells.....
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