| "Unseen" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kristen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am one of those eagerly awaiting the next chapter of "Unfettered," but I want to reassure you I don't mind the wait at all, especially when you give us the chance to read another story you've written. Much as I enjoy your longer stories, I also find your one shots very well written. You do a good job of telling the story and grabbing the reader and making them want to read it. You also get the reader emotionally involved. I found "Unseen" a very poignant story. It was amazing how three simple words so changed Kagome's outlook and gave her hope, and then she put Inuyasha's gift with the things she treasured most. Very well done. It's nice seeing Inuyasha get it right once in awhile. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: June 17, 2006 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really, really sweet and touching one shot! I really no, I greatly enjoyed it! What a great pleasure to read and delicious treat to offer your readers. Great work Literary Goddess!! Awesome!! Kudos!! Whoot! Whoot Whoot!!! You have captured the characters beautifully and brillantly!! I loved how Kagome expressed herself and her wants/desires when she thought no one was looking or listening. Very well done. And when Inuyasha told Kagome he only saw her that was sooo sweet. Just like him when others aren't around to ruin it for the two of them. Sometimes Inuyasha does things right and doesn't mess it up. I was wondering if you would be writing a sequel to this? You have such an amazing talent it's out of this world!! Please keep up the most excellent work!! And don't worry about Unfettered. Take your time with it.
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Reviewed By: fireofinuyashasNSI On: June 16, 2006 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an incredibly sweet one-shot that I enjoyed immensely. I know that I can say for anyone that has you on author alert that they are NOT mad when you put up a one-shot instead of a new story chapter, because the one-shots are always a pleasure to read. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into your wonderful writing. Sincerely, fireofinuyashas
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great one-shot. It was both sweet and thoughtful. I love your style and look forward to reading more of your writing soon.
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