Reviewed By: anonomous angel On: June 20, 2006 11:48 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I give you my comlements. Your told us in the beginning that this was a copyover from another of your stories. If it is or not it was still very fun to read. I perticularly found the understanding between the two boys sort of a... soft spot, as i have read a good few GW fanfictions. There is nothing that needes to be fixed in any ways and i didn't fina any spelling or gramatical errors. All in all I loved your story and Will be looking into your other ones ASAP