"Ryu's New Assistant." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Godhatesthisdrivel On: June 05, 2009 20:19 CDT Comment/Review: Lame, adolescent, crappy writing. If you haven't improved beyond this stage, you should quit writing for good.
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Title: WONDERFUL! Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 15:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: This was FUCKIN' HOT!!!! Please tell me your gonna update soon. Please? This is to much of an awesome fic for you not to. I was listening to the new Evanescence CD song Your Not The Only One when I was reading about Eiri in the hospital. It made me cry. Not many writers can do that to me. You get SERIOUS kudos for that. Keep up the outstanding work please. Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: Yadora-chan On: July 30, 2006 10:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, this fic really rules. I don't know what to say, it just rules, m'kay?
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Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 17:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I've only read the 1st chapter, but so far it's very enjoyable. I will review again when I finsh.
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