| "Her Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: beloved_nightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 04:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no no no! do not let those other people bring you down, it was a good story and i have seen A LOT worse... spelling needs a touch-up but not even i spell some things right! good job!
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity (nsi) On: July 14, 2006 11:30 CDT
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awe that was a cute ending hehehe and they lived happily ever after... even if they fight every other day lol thats awesome ^^ =/ i really hope that you write more fics after this one^^ i'll read all of them =D
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!! I hope that you have more stories in you.
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Reviewed By: lemon skittles On: July 09, 2006 07:06 CDT
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I like this story. Its coolish! Update soon, I can't wait to read more. -lemonskittles
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 22:46 CDT
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Gaah! Heart wrenching. I swear someone needs to slap some sense into Kagome. It's one thing to think Inuyasha has chosen Kikyo when he didn't, but to tell him she can't stay there? Is she mindless...? I wonder. At any rate, it's a very interesting story, full of emotion. I'd be interested to hear about the mastery of her powers too, as well as, see her give Inuyasha the love and happiness he deserves from her and to receive it from him in turn. Nice story so far! I await your next update!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome-sama9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 08:57 CDT
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ONEGAI!! ONEGAI HURRY UP EITH THIS!!
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: lovely_nightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 18:53 CDT
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Yeah i was in a hurry with my cousins wedding and all and i Rushed through the spell check I'm sorry it was definatly :) thnx for all the responses!! :)
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: June 29, 2006 15:09 CDT
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it's definitely... not defiantly. unless you want kagome to defiantly meet another man. defiantly means to challenge. sorry, one of my pet peeves and i've been seeing it a lot recently.
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love it! update soon =D
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Update soon please...
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
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Please fix your formatting. Two people should never speak in the same paragraph and the whole chapter is jumbled together in one big block of text. A blank line should be placed between each paragraph for ease of reading. Fix your formatting and maybe more people will review. Also, you should allow anyone to review instead of restricting it to only members of MediaMiner if you want more reviews.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice...definately adding this to my favorites
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great start here. I do await your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great Fic!!! Please update soon!!!
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