| "Shinobi In Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: raven (GuardianovThe3rdGate) On: September 21, 2006 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I am really enjoying this story though i am sad on the lack of updates lately. live and let live i guess. i really do hope you update this sometime soon though I'm looking forward to the next chappy.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: lmao On: September 03, 2006 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so happy but... I NEED MORE!
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Title: cute and funny
Reviewed By: kyocat16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahaha damn this story is funny
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: SpottedCow On: August 23, 2006 02:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fingers are crossed for an update soon! I'm excited by the possibilities of your story...ah the Naruto crew in Kagome's Tokyo-- can't wait to read how you develop things from here. My 2 cent hope is that Kagome is set up as strong and battle-savvy (its annoying to read her otherwise). Best wishes for your muse!
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Title: i like it a lot
Reviewed By: ballplayer7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have spelled some words wrong and missplaced commas or no commas in sentences. Other than that, i like you story. I like your creativity and can't wait until the new chapter comes out.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Miko On: August 19, 2006 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is good. It's the first IY/Naruto crossover fic that's not too OOC. I really like it. Do update soon!
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Reviewed By: 2SEXY4U On: August 19, 2006 04:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WANNA COOKIE ^^ well anyways i like ur story so is inuyasha gonna like come back 4 kagome and then he finds sasuke? or what? come on tell me i can keep a secret!!!!! ^^ ok i'll be waiting so make sure u update soon ^.~ hehe
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Title: ^^ I love it!
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 01:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! I really like the idea for this story. Your a really good writer, and I didn't notice that many grammer mistakes... People are just weird. Poor Kagome, at least Sasuke had a towel on! MG
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: August 18, 2006 19:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter! The scene with Hinata and the girls was funny! keep up the good work!!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Candy Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this was in class, i'd give you an A+, great job on the story!! Update soon
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Reviewed By: Silvermane9 On: August 13, 2006 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it!! Update soon!!
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Title: Sinobi In Tokyo
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas On: August 02, 2006 02:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE KEEP WRITING
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Reviewed By: duf-duff On: July 27, 2006 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayness. keep up the story.
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Reviewed By: whiteleopard On: July 26, 2006 22:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! this is a great fic. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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Title: update soon
Reviewed By: kitsunegirl05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 11:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update when you hhave the chance mabey on the 14th tats my bday so it would make an execelent gift ^_^
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