| "Shinobi In Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gizmo369 On: July 25, 2006 23:40 EDT
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Awesome story so far ^-^
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Reviewed By: crystallinetwine On: July 24, 2006 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I've seen a Sasuke/Kagome fic, and I must say, you certainly caught my attention! I hope you update soon. ^^
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 21, 2006 13:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
lol that was a good chapter! well i cant wait what u hav planned next for this fic.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 21, 2006 13:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
I think Kiba/Kag would be a much better pairing for this story Sasuke/Kag just doesnt seem to fit. Or maybe Shino/Kag would be good but its ur story im just saying what I think and believe.
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Reviewed By: Lady Kio-tye On: July 19, 2006 11:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This the first story I have given so many 10's for ^_^ You dont find many good naruto/inuyasha crossover, so there is no doubt that this is the bomb. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Larina On: July 19, 2006 11:14 EDT
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I love this story so far, please update soon!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kyocat16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 05:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your stories kick ass
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Title: None...
Reviewed By: Mrs cake (not logged in) On: July 17, 2006 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! i like it alot!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kyocat16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 14:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is so cool update soon
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Reviewed By: Raven (Guardianovthe3rdGate) 2 lazy 2 sign in On: July 13, 2006 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an amazing author. I love this story so far and hope you update both soon and often. as for ur little note bout this being a sasuke/kagome with a tiny sprinkling of kiba/kagome that is cool. and there is always the fact that with her affinity for dogs there would be a slight attraction there anyway. ~pouts~ plz update. ~grabs pitchfork from one of my plotbunnies~ or I promise to give ur plot bunny this toi help u along.....
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Reviewed By: TwiLiteVixen (@ff.net) On: July 12, 2006 12:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plot line but... There were several gramatical errors, sentences that don't flow correctly, and even sentences that aren't finished. I think what would help your writing, other than practice and reviewing others work, would be to get a beta-reader. Other than the mistakes I saw it's a good story. Please keep trying! TLV
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Reviewed By: Larina On: July 12, 2006 10:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really cool story I cant wait to see what happens next ^^
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Reviewed By: xxpatara On: July 12, 2006 08:43 EDT
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Well I like it so far, continue to update, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, maybe you could make the chapters a little longer.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 06:43 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy enjoy the story please update ASAP.But realy I love it,and it's very original.Never read a fic were they put Naruto,and some others into Kagome's world.
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Reviewed By: anime_gal1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 19:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is the inu gang going to come and meet them too??R they going to the feudal era!!Tell me plz.And UPDATE!!This is a awsome fic!!I give u all 10!!
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