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| "Gravity Falls:Reaching the Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: KShootsBadAuthors On: June 05, 2009 20:17 CDT
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Wow, you've really got the whole trashy fiction thing mastered. Can't you write any better than this?
| Reviewed By: CharmGirl24 On: September 12, 2007 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is such an amazing story and although there is some excellent smut, I feel intuned with the characters and Yuki's response to his lover's pain. I can't wait to read more of your fics.
| Reviewed By: Lacrima On: March 16, 2007 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D Wow, this thing was EPIC, and I do believe I'll be bookmarking it and recommending it to all of my yaoi-loving friends. Your style flows easily, but your diction is precise--I've seen SCADS of stories with good sentence structure and poor word choice, or vice versa. It's also extremely refreshing to see a story that isn't bursting at the seams with pretentious diction or overrun by highly UN-sexy colloquialisms. You have a perfect conception of character motives, behavior, thoughts, and covered the what-if's (Shuichi's repeated apologies after being a temporary seme, in particular) very nicely. Lastly, I'd like to add that the ending left me with a warm and fuzzy feeling, and for a cynical, apathy-ridden girl like me, that's quite the accomplishment (laughs). Keep up the excellent work, you have a GIFT for yaoi.
| Reviewed By: Scream On: July 29, 2006 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like PeachLove said, it could have been longer, but the story itself made up for it. Excelent!
| Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, man... That was such a yummy fic, but I kind of feel like it ended too soon. It could have really been a long one, don't you think? Oh well, if you feel like writing another Gravi fic, feel free to drop me a line about it. It was very well written and I'd be more than willing to read another like it! Much love.
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