| "He's too sexy for his money" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 01:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad. That scripted style is very old and cliche, but certainly better than some I've read. Your grammar and spelling need a bit of work as well, but over all, not bad.
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Title: *headdesk*
Reviewed By: Pyrotir [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 11:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
The only thing I can't handle about this fic is your shitty writing.
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Reviewed By: cody7799 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!! MUST WRITE MEET OF JOEY AT KAIBAS PLACE!
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Reviewed By: AnimeRox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it. write more plz
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