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Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right , now thats yaoi done right !
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Reviewed By: MadxForxYaoi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 02:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
*jaw drops* Holy shit! That was HAWT! YUMMMMMM! *hugs and kisses* OMFG! That was sexy. Sesshomaru and Inuyasha sex at it's best! Thank you so much. *drools* Sooooo h-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-ot!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
funnny i liked it it was soo cute
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Reviewed By: Nevert he angel On: July 13, 2006 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was funny, it made me laugh but at the same time i was into it and was still aware its a yaoi/hentai story. I liked how sesshomaru and inuyasha acted towards each other. Your a great writer.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! I loved how Inuyasha at first thought of it as wrong but was 'convinced' otherwise by Sesshomaru's actions. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Helena On: July 02, 2006 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good, i loved it. i hope you write more storys like these.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only gave you a five because of your paragraph form. Its like off... O____O if you need any extra betas, just let me know, I am willing to help. Great story though! Loves it. It'd be cool if it was more of a short story consisting of 4 chapters. It would be nice to hear what the others think as well as what happens to them after the mating. It is good for your first yaoi/inucest one I guess. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Finally! Someone that not make Inu-Chan and Sessh-Kun in heat! That was pretty sweet.
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