| "Artifice" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 18:11 CDT
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aaarrgh! im going insane here waiting for next chapter pls have pity and update pppplllleeeeessseee!!!!
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 10:18 CDT
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i been checking every day for update pls pls pls update soon
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Reviewed By: Colt45 On: October 04, 2006 17:38 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!! please
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: ranch_boy1 On: September 29, 2006 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awesome I love your story telling methods and it is very interesting in how you combined the naruto with the weapon X project in X-men
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really enjoyed reading this pls hurry and update soon cant wait for next bit keep up the good work =)
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Reviewed By: Zetsuke [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 22:56 CDT
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Another great chapter, can't wait to see Naruto break out! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice new chappy ^^ however did you come up with all this stuff...wait, dont answer that, i don't really wanna know. just keep writing! ^^ it's good, i like it
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Title: FLAME FLAME FLAME!!
Reviewed By: TheBlackRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nah, just kidding. I really liked this fanfic. I don't really like the NaruSaku pairing thing, though. Maybe You'll change my mind. But we won't know that unless you update! UPDATE SOON!! Oh, and is Sasuke gonna be in this one soon? I'm not a big fan of his or anything. I just like seeing Naruto and him FIGHT!! >:)
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh, i can't imagine anyone short of being completely ignorant of naruto not being able to recognize gaara XD :) i like it, please update soon
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Reviewed By: Colt 45 On: September 20, 2006 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this story is great keep it up im looking foward to ur next update
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Reviewed By: Zetsuke [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 18:33 CDT
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Wow, it took you a long time to update this. Try to be more consistent; I wanna see more!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 19:55 CDT
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Whoops, misspelled your...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 19:43 CDT
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You're style is excellent, I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next for this story.
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Reviewed By: channy On: June 21, 2006 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up! I like it! =]
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Reviewed By: Cail Jol On: June 21, 2006 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks like a good start to a pretty good fanfic, keep on writing.
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