| "Cream and Clothes" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 16:26 CDT
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That ending was kinda... cute... I don't know if that's what you were going for, and also I have to ask... how did someone not see them? I mean giving a blowjob in a public place isn't really that common that nobody notices is it? Love always, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 18:35 CST
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haha funny loved great job
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Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nicely written, I especialy liked the way that you started the story. A very effective opening makes the rest of the story more desirable to read, after all *-^ I'm sorry I can't really say too much, it's hard for me to write reviews on stories such as this ^^; but you did a nice job writing it.
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Reviewed By: HieiLover2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....write more please i really liked it...it was hot and steamy
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Reviewed By: Kurayami Kasai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply love this, but I did see a mistake or two with spelling. It's one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time, I'll give you that. And it's very amusing!
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Title: Badass
Reviewed By: Kirai666 On: June 23, 2006 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too bad... That had me sucking on my water bottle.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood- To lazy to log in On: June 22, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very hot!!! :D you should really write more to this!
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