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| "Code Lyoko E80: The Omega Program" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Famouf Amof On: June 29, 2006 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good story, filled some things in, killed time for the next episode, much like the rest a Grade A story. And I agree, that scene was sexual, just not spelled out as sexual, a subtle writer we have here.
| Reviewed By: Garfie2000 On: June 25, 2006 23:32 CDT
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Oh you know it was sexual, just reading it the thoughts get in your head, glad I'm not the only one going "Doesn't that sound like something from a bad erotic novel?" It says updated so guessing you fixed the stuff he talked about, so a Great Story!
| Reviewed By: DevinS On: June 25, 2006 11:47 CDT
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Spelling people! Also, Ulrich yelled "I knew... She did something to Ulrich!" It's towards the end, I think you meant Jeremie. Also, the scene with Ulrich and Yumi, even if it wasn't overtly sexual it was there, I think. Or you just had it as it was, Ulrich trying to get through to Yumi. Good story, but spelling and that line, a couple others, so forth.
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