Title: FIRST!! Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 22:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! IM UR FIRST COMMENT! i feel so honored. Your story sounds good, a bit vague, but good. It was short but sweet =) can't wait for you to update! [ummm..questions: where is kirara and Rin? What color are kagome's eyes?ya know in some fanfictions they are blue and others they are brown, i just wanna know. What kind of people are your characters? like are you gonna make inuyasha a jock? kagome a prep chick or something? I need more detail! haha UPDATE PLEASE!! XDD
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