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| "And then there was Light" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: juuhachi-chan
Reviewed By: juuhachi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 07:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good job! Well written, I can feel the action... just great, I'm so glad you updated again! ^^
| Reviewed By: Me On: May 25, 2007 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update the next chapter, will ya?? I like the beginning of the story, it's interesting...
| Reviewed By: cranium On: June 23, 2006 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool fic very original. I haven't seen to much done with the whole cell character, but I'm lookign forward to this. One thing though, I know you said this was going to be a cell fic..it just seems like she osrt fo likes trunks right now, or i kinda got taht feeling. Also a discription would be nice i want to know what she looks like, but i guess that's part of the mystery. Does she look like cell? Krillin said she had hair so I don't know if shes human looking or cellish looking, oh well. write more, ok?
| Reviewed By: supersanne_toolazytologin On: June 23, 2006 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far, I hope you update soon :)
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