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| "Don't Come Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: WWWWOOT
Reviewed By: tigrasa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 20:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic.Please continue!
| Reviewed By: Isadora The Great [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 15:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic is awesome! It's funny, it's got murderous intent, everything! I can't wait to see more!
| Title: lawl
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Havin em have to grab a card to read is f-wu-king hilarious man. Keep dis shat up!!!!
| Reviewed By: evil bastard On: August 17, 2006 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope u got another chapter to for this, it's funny as hell!!
| Title: Way to go
Reviewed By: Serac On: June 27, 2006 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not so much going to drill you with instructions and suggestions as much as I'm going to compliment you. I've looked over a lot of stuff here, and this is the first one I'm saying anything on. You captured the characters (essentially) very well, adding enough of your own design to make them awesome, and contemporary. I have no idea how you're going to stretch this plot out into a nice story, but if you can manage it, and it's the same quality as this, it should be sweet. Good luck, man, show us something.
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