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| "Sinner" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Makoto Sagara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2011 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your English has certainly improved since you wrote this, I can say from personal experience. However, this is very well written, and made me sad to see Treize die. It makes me wonder what I will do with Treize in The Perfect Plan... Anyway, I was enraptured by the plot and the way that Treize tries to explain himself. You should write the sequel. =P | Title: Ma Fa Tek Me
Reviewed By: Kalico (laziness is my worst virtue) On: July 31, 2006 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is no sequel? no sequel? how can this be? this is an awesome piece. it's even more awesome than the first time i read it but neglected to review. i love this story. you shouldn't have stopped there but nonetheless it was short lived and sweet. keep it up. u may become one of my fave authors. i think i'll check on your other fics if there are more. until then , i hope to see more from you. l8r
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