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| "Lemon's INC" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Electric_Sapphire On: January 30, 2007 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! May I just say, that was hot! An absolutely adorable couple (one of my secret faves- actually, any yaoi with Fuery is tops in my book) and a beautifully written story overall. You may want to look into getting a beta reader and checking the formatting of your story, but otherwise it's great. Are you still taking requests? I want you to know that I love your Scar/Al, so now I'd lie to request Scar/...anyone! Anyone is hot with Scar! Ed, Roy- hell, even Kimbley or one of the chimeras from the Devil's Nest! MAJOR MAJOR huggles and luff and glomping if you can find a way to get Scar with Falman or Fuery, both of whom need some serious lovin'. Personally, I can think of a viable scenario to get Scar with either of them, but I want to see what you come up with. :D Good luck, hon, and keep writing!
| Title: MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was too funny! you should write MORE ASAP!!! Next time, try to fight off fangirls (boys -_-lll) with a tree, it works sometimes! But more! Update soon!
| Title: DUDE SWEET!!!
Reviewed By: XkuramaandhieiX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THAT WAS SOOO COOL! i was wondering though...could you maybe do a Ed/Russell one...? maybe...please....GOOD STORIES!
| Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: tigerchick282 On: June 30, 2006 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was freaking great. I loved both storties. I am going to add them to my boomark now and I hope you update with some bigger and better ones soon. I can't wait. ^_^
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