| "Skeleton Jar" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Mrs.T On: November 09, 2008 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this and can't wait to see what happens next. I also agree that I like the fact that you didn't make Schuldich into a total jackass. I like that he's obsessed with Yohji and slowly coming to feel more than just that obsession for him. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay! you finally updated! but, argh you still left me wanting more...
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Reviewed By: snapy pants [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 21:06 CDT
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OH NOS!!! Don't wipe Yohji's mind!!!! AAH!!! p.s. SO GLAD THERE'S A NEW CHAPTER! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR-EVAR!!!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: September 25, 2008 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
glad you continued this. interesting twist.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 20:27 CDT
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Just so you know, I don't READ anything but my OTP. I don't. Ever. So I didn't read this, and didn't think it was HOT as HADES. Nope. I didn't. ;)
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 02:27 CDT
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i was so glad when i saw you had updated your story. i always wanted to know what schuldig was planning on doing and you certainly did not disappoint. i just love a good schu/yohji story and yours is among the best. i look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: evanscence On: May 17, 2007 13:21 CDT
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I love this! I liked how manipulative you made Schuldig even without focusing slowly on his supernatural mental skills. I hope there will be more of this story.
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Reviewed By: Nariel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*giddy squee* *signs the CONTINUE-petition* *bribes you with a cookie and settles down to wait*
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 14:02 CDT
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Omni, darling, this story says "To Be Continued." PLEASE CONTINUE!! I'd love to see how this progresses and develops. I like that your Schu isn't a complete bastard who is just trying to mess with Yohji's head, but seems genuinely engaged. He makes for a much more intense and interesting story. I sincerely hope that there will be more to come!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 18:23 CDT
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Beautiful job of relaying lucid dreaming aspects. I applaud you, darling, this was fabulous.
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Title: No reviews?
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 00:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
And why, pray tell, does this lovely bit of fiction have no reviews? You did a fine job on the dreams, confused and eerie for the characters, yet easy to follow. and you certainly caught the mood of the show!
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