| "Learning Aids" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: UltraEra On: November 08, 2006 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sexy sexy sexy!!!! Please continue, this was a hot read!
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Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my quite the enjoyable read, you will be continuing it, yes? Would love to see how things progress.
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Reviewed By: stfuPaige On: July 13, 2006 02:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must say I /adore/ this story. I always pictured Ryo with his tapes & videos for "Gay Sex for Dummies". I love how Dee's all "Make me your slave! >]". This story is just /too/ funny, I love every bit of it. Its very well written, plus it's sexy as anything. I do hope you'll write more stories in the future! ;]
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Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes I must say that i really enjoy this litte story of your and cant wait for the next chappie updat soon ok ^_~
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Reviewed By: deserblue On: June 26, 2006 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have no idea how long i have been waiting for this kind of story to come out it has all my fantasies rolled into one. Please continue this story because i want to know what he gets and maybe he might get one of my favorite toys to suprize Dee with when they are out on the town to get him horny
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