| "union of two elements" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: goje On: January 29, 2007 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oooh a lemon would do so good in the next chapter, ne? =^-^= I've really enjoyed this story so far. kinda sweet and all ^^ hope to see the next chapter soon :P
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
ok. this was just soooooo.... awesome!! lol. u need 2 update lyk really soon. its been wat?? around 5 months since u last updated. so.. plz, plz, plz update soon. im dying 2 read the next chapter & the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: Lovely Lust [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! It's so cute how Roy and Ed are behaving--I'm dying for more. Please, please add another chapter soon!!
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Reviewed By: ash892 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why end there? like it so far. can't wait for the next chapter. ash892
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 20:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT? How can you end it like that? Grrr. Cliffies suck! Hurry up and write more! *sulk* you're so mean. :-) But I love this story! Its great!
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Reviewed By: bluerose24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope that you update this story soon. It is really good so far and I would love to read more of it.
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 04:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is good. Could you write more? I want to read more! Lol. Its great!
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