| "Hanyou Fantasies" Reviews/Comments [ 122 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 04:32 EDT
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I have to admit, it is pretty funny. Besides, I love to torture our lovely hanyou XD. Overall, very cute story so far. ^_^
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: animelovera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fictions is great i laugh everytime that i read it. Poor Dog boy don't know what to do with himself. Kagome is real bold in this one I like that, most of the other stories have her weak and shy. I like this one for the boldest that you r taking with this two characters keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 21:27 EDT
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lol, that was an excellent chapter! I really like the new angle that it added as well - now he knows what she wants, it's onlt a matter of applying it ;) I also loved the ending. it was classic! kudos!
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Reviewed By: me On: July 21, 2006 19:41 EDT
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during the last three chapters i was laughing so hard that tears were running down my face and 1. it made it hard to read and 2. sort of killed the mood but it 3. makes this one of my top favorite stories on this page! its hilarious! its genius! its just so much fun! the whole girl fatasy thing is pretty spot on (bulging muscle, neverending stamina and patience plus the obvious knowledge of doing all the right things at all the right times...) i was rolling on the floor. literally! even though i doubt inuyashas mind would work like this (because hes my perfect fabio-equivalent *grin*) i do believe the minds of most boys and sadly even men out there do... so go go go! youre damn good at this!
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan (still not signed in sry) On: July 17, 2006 16:59 EDT
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hehe I adore his little ending reassurance. Gotta love how simple men can be :p Poor Inu, when WILL you learn, not for a few more chapters I don't think hehe! He's going to be a pro by the end of this poor story :D Another good chapter, just as humorous as sexy!
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 13:21 EDT
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This story is HILARIOUS!! However, I do think our Inu has been tortured enough, ne? poor guys' gonna go insane if he doesn't get some soon!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 12:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOOL! The howl thing InuYasha did was hilarious!! I almots fell form the chair from laughting that hard)) Poor pup! He shouldn't lose hope, though. His dick is bigger after all 0_o ^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: InuYoukai24 (Not Signed In) On: July 17, 2006 10:52 EDT
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roflmgdmfao!!! so horrible!! hahahaha stupid inuyasha has to take into mind those little things that count, and not think so much about it!! He's already used to the "sits", and he's stronger than Kagome! lmao!! Oooh man, poor pup's all messed up!!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As an ex stoner I have often pondered the possiblity of infinte possiblity. What if what you wrote or though was actually made real just by writing it or thinking. It would be kind of funny if that was true. I don't know why that though came into my head when I was reading this last chapter. Other then maybe if it were true and you story was somehow made real though our reading it, poor Inuyasha. That's what I thought. This is very good comedy. It was like watching a Ben Stiller movie, I could feel his embarassment and frustration. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is officially hysterical. Between his much-bigger-than-Kagome-realized cock and the howling; well ... I'm at a loss for words. Except; Fabio? I can only think that Fabio was required since he's the only book-cover model anyone's ever heard of. Can't quite pull Hugh Jackman DVDs out of the old backpack and have it be meaningful in the Feudal Era. Denis Leary might be nice but there's that same logistical problem rearing its ugly head. Fabio it must be then.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: July 17, 2006 02:41 EDT
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that was a great chapter. it's like reading a smut book with the guy commentary from the side. really great dialogue tool...or should it be said, monologue. and i think "Was this the voice-I-try-to-listen-to-because-it's-smarter-than-me or was it my dick talking>/i>" is one of the best lines i've ever read! very well done! i'm throughally impressed!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one! 2 thumbs up!~ B reading U!
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Title: Woot! Woot! Woot! Woot!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a work all its own, lol...between the muffcuntquim, and the his-ours, I had to go BACK and reread it cuz I couldn't stop laughing. And poor InuYasha just doesn't have a clue, does he...HELL NO...the dolt, lol....he could be gettin some of that, but NOOOO, all hes lookin for (to me anyway) is to get laid, and it seems what Kagome's lookin for is some romance, THEN get laid, lmao....This is just too precious, it really is. I love it and cant wait to see what happens next. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble23 On: July 16, 2006 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha will never learn *gigle*. He messes up every opportunity to get what he wants. Him and his damn mouth. Maybe he learned enough from the dream to get a little further in his quest for a litte muffcuntquim, then again maybe he won't. Either way it's fucking hilarious. Can't wait to read more. Update soon! Lexi AKA Bubble-chan
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Reviewed By: keiko.chan On: July 16, 2006 21:57 EDT
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ok. this is so the most sexually frustrating/hilarious story I've read to date. Keep up the effing awesome work! ... and please pLeAsE PLEASE let Inu get laid damn soon. LOL!
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