| "Welcome to the Organization" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: OriginalSin1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is a great fic *Wipes blood off floor* But the grammar kind of takes away from it. Maybe for your next chapters (Or stories) you could try finding a beta reader. Anywho, kudos on the lovely smut, that was awesome. In general, I really enjoyed this. So keep writing. =D
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Title: randjn
Reviewed By: randjn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic so much, and i have been a fan from the begining. the story is so much fun to read, and it's so easy for me to be sucked in. and i also admit that was a little freaked out when i thought that axel killed zexion... you are so awesome
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Reviewed By: Demyxsloveslave [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was a very enjoyable story ^_^ I love fanfics that give you an insite on Organization XIII and it seemed realistic even though stupid Disney would never allow yaoi >> You never know maybe SquareEnix will XD. But yes. Wonderful job. >> I feel even worse for Axel *cries* *cough* >> Keep it up! I wanna see what happens...;;^^ After all my lack of gameboy prohibits me from playing Chain of Memories
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Title: One Quarter...
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter, although, like you said, it is short. As for Chain of Memories, I just started playing it, so I'm just about a quarter of the way through, seventh floor, I have beat Axel, Larxene, and Riku. Myep. Hope you continue soon. Much love.
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Title: No Errors!
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No errors at all, this time! All I could say is that I counted approximately five question marks at the end of one sentence, but I know that that's just how some people write and I won't hold it against you. Ah, how the tension grows between Roxas and Xemnas. I can't wait to see it come to a head. Waiting patiently 'til the next update...
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Title: EEEEK!!
Reviewed By: InuAngel788 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW CUUUUTE!!!! I LOVE it!! Your story is adorable!! A little much on making roxas really childish and wimpy.. but its ok! I still love it! Please continue!! It's good!! ^_^
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Title: Rape ...
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it just me, or does this fic have "Roxas rape" all over it? I have nothing against it, though I will be sad for poor little Roxas. I really hope you come out with the next chapter soon, and you're on my list, so I'm watching! As for tips, Spellcheck is your friend, always remember that and YOU CALLED ROXAS SORA right after Axel comes back to his room to check on Roxas and says that he looked peaceful. It just threw me off is all...
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Reviewed By: BloodyBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK i have see no one else will review so i will. I loved it i have read this about 5 times now so if you could please keep this story up i would be beyound happy
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