Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Yuugi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must say, I was rather pleased when I read this piece of fanfiction. The style, feel, and flow to it all blended in together rather nicely. There were no glaring grammatical issues, but the dialogue placement made me feel a little iffy on whether it should be that way or not. Another problem I noticed was that the story, despite how wonderfully it read, the plotline was a little hard to follow, causing me to look back on the paragraph and think "Huh?". All in all, though, with the satisfied feeling it left me behind with, I'd say that this story is definitely worth its salt. I really enjoyed reading this piece, and thank you for submitting to the FFARG!
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