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Reviewed By: Sailor_moon1996 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!! keep update the good work. Really interesting so far...can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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Reviewed By: the critic On: July 01, 2006 01:12 CDT
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let me begin by saying: huh? have you even done any actual research? okay, let's review: 1. how did inuyasha know how to get to the hospital? 2. hallucinating and fever *are* signs of pneumonia, therefore doing all those tests when they already knew what she had was pointless: - why would kagome need an MRI or x-ray if they already knew it was pneumonia, do you even know how much it costs to do that? there'd be other ways to extract the infomation, blood tests for one would've made more logic or checking fluids - Lumbar puncture?!? that's absolutely absurd! i realise they do that quite often in the show, but do you even honestly know what it's for?? pneumonia's in her lungs- not in her spine! -pleasant hullucinations wouldn't make differences in her vital signs. so unless she's having a schitz attack while on a trip after taking some bad dope, her bodily rates aren't exactly going to change. phew! there's more, but i feel those are the main glitches in your story. why would the doctors order an X-ray AND an MRI? they do the same thing! anyways, moving on i just wanted to ask: are you a 'newb' to writing or something? otherwise you have no excuse for making eveything bold! i guess if you're taking notes from the show it'd make sense that there were so many medical inaccuracies in your fic, you need to do research on *why* house calls for things instead of plastering your fic with fancy terms
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Reviewed By: Carree On: June 30, 2006 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm.......interesting....i like were this is going so far....hmmmmm.....anyway awesome work! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: zincpaw On: June 30, 2006 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! This is my reasoning for my ratings, the chapters could be longer, but your spelling is good, and you seem to know exactly what all the medical terms mean. Other than that. I love you, you crossovered my two favourite shows, Inuyasha and House. Are we going to find out how she got sick, and will the characters from House meet Inuyasha? Oh and I would have put a 9.5 as the overall rating but it ewas not an option. Sorry. Zinpaw =^-^=
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 02:09 CDT
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I like the fic so far, but people die at 108. Proteins and enzymes denature and the body breaks down. Oh well. I would prefer to read it as is then something completely accurate without the perfect and precise way you nail the characters.
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Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If only there was a higher rating then 10, then you would so have it. Thank you for Updating so soon, great work. I really want to know what she has, though, which makes it just like the show. Also House's personality is very well captured, great overall. Keep up the good work please.
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Reviewed By: owlyoukai On: June 28, 2006 21:40 CDT
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I never would have thought of this crossover. I enjoy InuYasha and House but would have never thought of combining them. Kudos for actually doing medical research to base your story on.
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Title: GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooooooooo great! You have gotta update soon though. I mean House and Inuyasha that's something I've just never seen, and your doing a great job too. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
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Title: EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKK
Reviewed By: TimeTurnner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH this is so kool, my two favotet t.v. shows in one. it's really good. keep her going plz
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: June 27, 2006 20:40 CDT
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Sorry for the stupid question. Anyhoo, keep at it! Can't wait for another. ~moosegirl13
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 14:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool.
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 27, 2006 13:59 CDT
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cool, update soon!!!
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Title: Luv It
Reviewed By: Story1 On: June 27, 2006 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story already, the first time House spoke, I laughed cause you got him down Pact. I feel for you and all the information you had to look up, but you got it. I'm gonna be reading it until the end so update quickly.. As you can see I love house and Inuyasha a two in one
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: June 26, 2006 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, my mum is obsessed with House ^^. So far, you're doing an excellent job. Keep at it! I'm wondering though, it said this fic had romance in it... Who's going to be with who? You're doing a great job on portraying Dr. House's personality. Love it, and I can't wait to read more! ~moosegirl13
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Reviewed By: Tacha On: June 26, 2006 08:58 CDT
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House is my newest obsession. I don't know where you're going to take this fic, but I hope you continue.
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