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Reviewed By: jesswolf22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story
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Title: Bubonic Plague
Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very interesting! When I read the first chapter and hit 'bloody sputum', something clicked in my mind and I was like 'Where have I heard that phrase before?'. When Kagome admits that she was hanging around the well quite a bit, and said well was quite old, I was actually really excited. ("Holy Shit! A fic that involves the Black Plague!") I did a speech on the Bubonic Plague back in ninth grade and, sadly, it's one of my favorite diseases. -_-: Props to you for the connection between the shows! It makes me wonder how many other people would've been able to pull it off. You followed the format of 'House' to nearly a 'T'. The only thing that I found lacking was when Foreman was sent back in time. He seemed to take the news that he had traveled five hundred years back into Fuedal Japan qutie well. Now that I think of it, however, so did Kagome... You wrote a great fiction and it's too bad that people like 'the critic' are too mentally retarded when it comes to plot building. A 'fun' medical term that is linked to the Bubonic Plague: Disseminated Intravascular Coagulation. (It's suprisingly hard to say when giving a speech.)
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Reviewed By: Corrina On: July 17, 2006 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first, when I read that this was a House/Inuyasha crossover I was a bit weary; but I'm glad I read it. It was very well written. I appreciate the creativity of this story. Thank you for allowing the story to be read.
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Reviewed By: darkangelofthenight02 *nsi On: July 07, 2006 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me just say, this story is pretty cool since you've managed to put two of my favourite shos together, but why is everything in bold? your storyline is really cool, even though some of your medical connotations are innacurate as/w your tests and how they proceed (my dad's a doc so i hear it alot) . don't take this as a flame, bc it's not but what really lets down your story is the fact that you write like a n00b ie; bold, lack of character and plot description etc, really pull down your fic. anyways it'll be interesting to see where this goes. *D.A.O.T.N
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Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 22:55 CDT
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The story was interesting and was a good idea but it as incredibly bare. Your chapters were extremely short and none of you characters had real depth except for House in the first and second chapters. I think that you write well you just need to slow down, develop, and flesh out your ideas some. Otherwise they come off very raw and choppy whit many holes in the plot...
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Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 22:45 CDT
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Ok, so you have peaked my interest! I found this fic while watching House but haven't had the chance to read it until now! So onto chapter 2!
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Reviewed By: Katdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 21:56 CDT
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Uh... I like to read stories offline, so I print everything out first... I think I figured it out just from reading your comment at the top of chapter seven. I REALLY wish you hadn't said that. I'll review the story itself when I actually read it. But I am so excited you did a House fanfic!
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW IT!!! I wasn't completely sure, cause I didn't know the symptoms, but as soon as you said rat I knew it was the bubonic plague. That was sooo cool! Thanks for the story, it was great! Please write us another one. Pretty please with sugar and a cherry!
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Title: Oh!!
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH! I think I might have a small idea as to what Kagome caught, but I'm going to keep my mouth shut and wait and see. Great work so far keep the updates coming, cause the suspence is killing me!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 06, 2006 01:42 CDT
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A rat? That could trigger rabies i think...... or just a really bad infection, i'm no good with medical stuff so whatever update soon!!
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Title: I know! ... I Think...
Reviewed By: BurningTheMidnightOil [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny! Very amusing, definately worth reading... Twice. I believe she has Haunta Virus, which can be transmitted by rodents; causes chills, fever, delusions, vomiting, diahreea, and other fun stuff.
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Reviewed By: sharon-yugiohgirl03 On: July 03, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 4 is perfect...kogame is going to have to be careful though dont want inu going through the roof...lol...lmao
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Title: Haha
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man good way to end that chapter! I'm sure that that is exactly what Inuyasha would have done, and I'm sorry that some one gave such a mean review. The story's great and any sain person can tell that you know what you writing about. Keep the updates coming please I love this fic lots!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 02, 2006 23:42 CDT
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Hehe Inuyasha is harassing people.... what i wan to know is what is wrong with Kagome? but hopefully you'll explain it with more chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
House and Inuyasha are like the two main shows that I watch so this is like double the pleasure for me! The chaps are kinda short, but they're good. I do have 2 questions though: How did Inuyasha know where Kagome was? And How did he get there? Other than that, I absolutely love. ^.^
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