| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: The Trash Man On: February 04, 2007 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even better chapter. Please continue with this fantastic story.
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Reviewed By: The Trash Man On: February 04, 2007 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent begginning.
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Title: ......
Reviewed By: chako On: December 13, 2006 02:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please u totally got 2 update the next chapter.if u reading this i'm gonna say 2 continue u'r story until the end.i mean what the point u updated this story and not finish it.think.but either than that i like u'r story.i mean it's not every day naruto beat kakashi ,right.
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Title: ruff rider for life
Reviewed By: rough rider for life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO REALLY UPDATE ASAP
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Reviewed By: rasengan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great fic and noone really knows what happened to Rin they have never told in the manga or the anime. But that doesn't matter because this is your fic you write it how you want it.
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Reviewed By: Aidis [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. I like it. Shouldn't Naruto hate Sarutobi, Rin, Kakashi, Sakura, Sasuke, and all of Konoha in general? Ahhh lord knows. Update soon! -Aidis
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Reviewed By: Chocolate Milk On: July 11, 2006 11:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
simply amazing! this is awesome!!! i love it! its so interesting! and the way you made naruto act, it really gives depth to the story. i am looking forward to your next update!
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