| "Is It For Business Or Pleasure ?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. Hurry with the updates! |
Reviewed By: Kasei Tomodatchi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 10:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, now I really am about to feel like the Big Bad Critic, but again, this is going WAY too fast to be enjoyable for long. And is is just me, or is Trunks acting like a jerk? I dunno, maybe I'm just weird and/or stupid, but something about this story just idn't working. Oh, the plot's adorable, but there's just something about the way Trunks and Pan are acting..........sorry. I'll shut up now. *slaps her knuckles with a ruler* Shame on me for being such a jerk. |
Reviewed By: Kasei Tomodatchi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 09:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Haha! What an awkward situation! Do I need to rate this again? I don't think so...well anyways, I'm off to read the next chappie! |
Reviewed By: Kasei Tomodatchi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a first chapter, this is pretty good!! It seemed a bit hasty though, I don't want to sound like the big bad critic from hell, but could you use a little more description? ^_^ Otherwise, it looks good so far! |
Reviewed By: maria On: April 04, 2002 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
loved the fan-fic please write more can't wait to see more of your work!!!! please write more... |
