| "Just An Illusion Of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey the story is awsome. I love how your going about describing whats going on through Pan's diary. Although you could lay off the I love Trunks stuff. Its kinda repetitive. I mean that in a helpful way. Other then that I cant wait to see what happens. Hope you put up some more chapters soon!
Storm
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Reviewed By: maria On: April 08, 2002 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it keep on writing ... it's soo good you can't leave it like that ...T/p rules ...(just had to say it lol) well kepp on writing and finish soon please |
