| "A Blessing in Disguise?" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 22:25 CST
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ahhh! ::falls over and dies:: please, please write more. i love this so far.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this might be the first fic I have read that has them being parents to a pup that wasn't their own besides Shippou. I hope you continue on with this it's shaping up to be a go story.
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Reviewed By: me! On: September 19, 2006 20:43 CDT
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awww! that was so freaking cute! i love it!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a beautiful start to your story. I think you captured the inner turmoil that they both have very well. They both hurt so much. It's so heart warming to see Inuyasha with the family he always wanted. It seems like he might have a shot at happiness with the people who care for him the most. This pup will do him a great deal of good. I love your storyline so far and it's very creative and sweet. I look forward to your continued updates, thanks so much for sharing this with us!!
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple1 On: August 15, 2006 23:22 CDT
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Very original. I was saddened by the fact that there were only two chapters so far. I really hope you update soon, I'm really beginning to like this story. Perhaps you could put up a meaning of what the names mean? I'm just curious to know.
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Reviewed By: Rinlover(offline) On: August 14, 2006 17:30 CDT
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not bad, but they were a little OOC. I like it though, KEEP UP THE UPDATES!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: August 14, 2006 15:55 CDT
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Please update this story as soon as you can. I'm really enjoying reading it. It's light with just the right amount of angst. There were no spelling or grammar errors that jumped out at me. And with a mother who was an English teacher, that's saying something. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: BlackSpinner2009 On: August 14, 2006 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a really sweet story! I really like it. Iv seen attempts at this that have been bad but so far your doing really really well! Please update soon!
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Title: Good start! ^^
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I like this so far! If Inuyasha still has doubts about Kagome they'll be washed away once he sees her taking care of their new member. ^^ I hope you describe him in more detail and have Kagome or Inuyasha name him! Oh, just a suggestion, you might want to consider reading up on induced lactation if the baby boy is young enough to not eat solids. Otherwise you don't need to consider it, hehe. Kagome inducing lactation would be perfect. E-mail me if you need any ideas! ^^ Oh, one more thing, try to use more description in your chapters. It'll help flesh out the story a bit more while making it even more interesting than it already is. ;) Anyways, I've really enjoyed your story so far and I hope you update asap.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 14:29 CDT
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that was so sweet and sad. i do hope that you will continue to write beause it has a great start and don't worry about english no one likes it or can write it perfectly.
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story line, I've never read anything quite like this before, and I'm loving every word of it. Continue, and I promise to review! -Kinoko
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Title: YOOOOO-MG
Reviewed By: kireinakao On: July 13, 2006 10:38 CDT
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that was really good! i'm excited to read what comes next, so i hope you have a lot in store!!
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Reviewed By: Ochiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 07:46 CDT
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So Inu Yasha's a father now? This should be interesting... It'll be like having two Inu Yasha's running around! o.O;; I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter; keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bk On: July 13, 2006 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: kyonkichi-luver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this one, it's really original. PLZ update soon!
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