| "Prince Of Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUH!?! why stop??????? please keep going im adding u to my favs so i dont miss anything
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS!! THIS WAS LIKE MY FAVORITE MOVIE GROWING UP!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple On: July 27, 2006 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the idea of doing an InuYasha/Prince of Egypt fic is a great one, but just as the other reviewer said, memorizing and writing the lines word for word don't make it enjoyable at all. And all you would have to do would be just to change the names and that's definitely not the purpose of a fanfic. I can't say whether I liked your style of writing, because well, it all seemed like someone else's. I would really like to see your own take on this, and changing it up to make it somehow different from the movie. (Also, something that I think is contradicting, in the first chapter, you had the mother and other people singing in Hebrew, but you said in the beginning that it was humans and demons, not two different races of humans.)
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Title: WHOOT!
Reviewed By: suikidoen On: July 08, 2006 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D this ff is more enjoyable then the movie there's like 50 diff versions of it >.> most of them being in real pplz version! I will give u 60 bags of cheetoes if you update by the 20th!
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Title: CRACK
Reviewed By: Dreamer6166 On: July 05, 2006 00:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY IS LIKE CRACK IT FEEDS OUR ADDICTION AND IF YOU DONT UPDATE THE ADDICTION WILL GO OUT OF HAND AND MAYYBE WE MIGHT GET VIOLENT lol jk jk buh please update!!
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: whitemoon3311 On: July 05, 2006 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE CHAPTER, BUT UPDATE THE NEXT ONE SOON PLEESE, THANK YOU. YOU WRITE WELL.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: staralinga On: July 05, 2006 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're good! Can't wait for the next chapter to come up soon!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: andrea Ray On: July 05, 2006 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. I just found it with the latest chapter, and I have loved every bit that I've read so far. I will definitely be keeping up with it from now on. Please update soon.
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: inuAngelInuDevil On: July 05, 2006 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep going i love it
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: June 29, 2006 09:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
perhaps you should adapt the story and make it your own instead of taking everything from the movie. having memorized the movie it's no fun reading something that is so plainly ripped off.
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Reviewed By: Charice On: June 28, 2006 09:02 CDT
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That was a great start. I really like it. Inuyasha and sesshomaru bonding. I think Inuyasha would be really cute sewing. Is Kagome going to appear in this fic? Or is there any pairing? Update soon!
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