| "Midnight Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight not signed in at the moment because she doesn't feel like going through this every time just to write a review On: November 10, 2006 00:00 CST
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other than the fact that kagome n inuyasha do not talk that way, the story was rushed, and the characters seemed rather ooc... i liked it. but it could have been so much better had it been detailed and in character. it'd make a wonderful chapter story after some editing, i adore this idea of yours.
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Reviewed By: Meiko Kazuke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really agree with the other two reviewers. I did liked it quite well. You had good grammar and only a couple mistakes but it didn't take away from the stories quality. I say keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: little-pixie n.s.i On: July 02, 2006 14:45 CDT
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i agree with inusdemoness apart from the not likeing it part. there wasn't much there, as in a story/ plot, but even so i feel that if you keep this going it has good pertential (SP?) keep it going1 :)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness n.s.i On: July 01, 2006 12:22 CDT
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I can't say that I liked it. Your grammar was good and the story flowed better than I expected but it didn't seem like you had a good grasp on the character's personalities judging from the dialog. The Archaic speech you used was misplaced on some characters and also it wasn't worded correctly. "It is Kagome I wish to speak upon" You can't speak upon someone unless you're standing on top of them, you speak with them.
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