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| "cry of the youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: short but good
Reviewed By: Inu_Chik On: March 04, 2007 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i loved it.It was short but good you say this was your first Fic well it was wonderful and i plan on reading more ofer you fics :-)
| Title: Kinda Fast...but Nice
Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked you fic, but here are a few suggestions. First,it was fast and it left me wondering is this a one-shot? What could possibly happen next? I liked oout both of them where OOC(out of character.) That's what peeked my interest. Second, if you are going to continue this story then are you inserted the other characters? Last, although I enoyed it I hope, if there is a second chapter, maybe slow down just a tiny bit and add more details. I love it. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Whipstickagostop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story very much! very nice ... its very good for your first .. :3 i would luff to read more i also like the pairing uber much
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