| "Hate, Love, Or Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: kina12! On: August 12, 2006 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg this is your first?! you go girl! i think it rocks! i understand the shortness of it, cause you were testing out your fic writing right? yeah i tried to write a comedy/hentai and got reviews saying that it was good, but i got writers block like a mother- so i kind of stopped for a while, til im ready to think and write, i think that if i read more ill get better....so you keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kina12! On: August 12, 2006 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: dangerangel On: July 26, 2006 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good for your first. While the shortness of it kinda bugs me, I do understand. All in all you did a very good job.
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Reviewed By: lala4y On: July 04, 2006 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice story hope you update
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Reviewed By: Whipstickagostop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic ... its really good for your first :3 and lemons are my favourite hope to read more from you ...
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