| "Sojourn" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tidoo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo, that was good! Somewhere in the beginning I feared for another high school story, but no, you did something really interesting and quite original. Your plot is good and I love the way you made your characters discovered little by little how to have a normal life. I'm not sure you plan on making another chapter, nor finishing this story but it was fun to read it nonethless. thanks a lot, that was really good! -Tidoo
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Reviewed By: animeshadow alpha On: July 30, 2007 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very good story and has a good plot. It keeps my interest of what will happen next and has good narrative. Situations are sirious or very humorous with good balance of both conditions. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ***lakusu yamato *** On: October 20, 2006 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally! A really good story! Continue soon! :D
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved reading this story! you kept everyone in character so well! I hope you're able to put the next chapter out soon.
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Reviewed By: sugarpony [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story! I've always enjoyed reading about what happens in between the two wars, but hardly anybody writes about it... The one thing I would like to see that hasn't been written yet, though, is a confrontation between Kira and Yzak. After all, Dearka knows who Kira is, but Yzak doesn't. I'm looking forward to your next chapter! Keep up the good work! ~Sugarpony
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