| "The Unforgiven Outcast" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 04:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another well-written chapter! *stares* You do realize you're killing me with worry, right? Now I have to worry about Bakura stealing poor Yuugi's innocence...only Atemu has the right to take that! *shakes fist* I'm glad to see Atemu's back to cuddling Yuugi. ^___^ That made me feel all warm and nummy inside. Until next update, then? ^___^ Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 05:49 CDT
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Excellently done! *applauds* Poor Atemu, given Yuugi's background, it's probably going to be hard for him to develop any feelings for Yuugi. Or maybe not, given that Yuugi can soothe Atemu out of a nightmare already. Looks like a rocky road ahead for them, and they've hit a snag already. How will Atemu patch things between them now, I wonder? Looking forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a little hesitant about reading this story because I'm pretty much strictly a Puzzleshipper/Blindshipper. You mentioned that there may be Bondshipping (I could be wrong, but I think it's actually Boundshipping) later on, and that concerned me because I don't like Atemu/Yami no Yuugi and Yuugi being with anyone except each other. But you totally blew me away with this story. You're an awesome writer. I could practically see this story unfolding in front of me, like it was a movie on a big screen. Your characters are well-rounded, the events convincing and realistic, the plot line terrific, the story well-thought out...I am amazed. Please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: bunny453 On: July 02, 2006 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wai!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: July 01, 2006 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Wonderful! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! Update soon for more yamyams! Yay! Only M/M smut from here on out! Cake for that! ^_^
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Title: I Love It!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: July 01, 2006 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it! Wonderful! Awsome! Cookies and pocky for you! Update soon for yamyams! ^_^ Wonderful!
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