| "Problems at the Office" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Carcol _Blood [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 09:12 CDT
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hmm.... Good story so far.... but I think the context that you placed Kagomes' mother and father in are a bit off.... Well... at least her mothers I know for sure..
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I don't why it doesn't have that many reviews. It's a clever little story and I can't wait for the update. Anyways, great fic and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Title: Ch.3
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot ch.3 is here and welcome back. A very good chapter and I am looking forward to reading the next one. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: TimeTurnner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that ending for the second chapter was creepy. but i loved it. keep it going
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: loopylion On: June 30, 2006 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this, it's great. Although could I offer a suggestion? Why not try double spacing, it would make it easier to read.
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is looking really good and I like the premise as well. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: June 29, 2006 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. So Kagome is a mob boss huh? This is going to be interesting.
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good continue please.
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