| "Entangled" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: so sad
Reviewed By: hashala2694 On: October 30, 2009 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness that was so great i loved it so much you are an amazing writer and I think you should keep writing definitely I gave you ten out of ten on everything because that's what i thought you deserved cause you do so keep writing and i'll keep reading thanks for the awesome fic!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has rendered me near speechless. I am just in awe at all the emotions you evoked in me with this story. It's beautifully written and the emotions are subtle, and the ending is raw and coarse, and yet beautiful at the same time. Brilliant, wonderful fic!
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Reviewed By: Amara Anon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 03:35 CDT
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Wow, you put a lot of work and research into this. Good for you for sticking to your own creative vision and not worrying about how others might react to it. I think it paid off.
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Reviewed By: Nelson B On: June 30, 2006 19:41 CDT
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That was beautiful, sad, waaah! I'll have to leave an indepth review in a hour or so because I'm being booted off the computer.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: June 30, 2006 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so tragic! ... sobs for a moment... Awesome!! Kudos!! What a one shot Literary Goddess!!! Very powerfully written and beautifully presented!! It is another shining example of your mastery of the written word!! I love it!! I enjoyed it!! Every part of this story was masterfully crafted. There was just the right amount of description and character interaction blended perfectly together. To die like that!! At least they'll have each other in the afterlife. I enjoyed how Sesshoumaru struggled with his own thoughts, feelings and doubts. I would say this is as romantically tragic as Romeo and Juilet. Heck I would even put it next to Romeo and Juilet! You had me right there with the characters going through what they were expericencing and that is really great!! The imagery!! The details! The saddness!! What a talent you have and show!!! Even though Sesshoumaru was slightly OOC it was brillantly presented and superbly passed off!! I think only a few writers can achieve this without making Sesshoumaru look like a fairy fruitcake (not sexual preference remark) instead of an aristocratic and stiff. I alos loved it when Sesshoumaru allowed a claw to drip his poison an awesome touch and I found it very Sesshoumaru-ish!! I did feel sorrow for Rin - to be "dumped" upon another Lord as part of a deal. And proud that she remained true to her Lord in her heart. Am farily surprised that Sesshoumaru was unable to stop the attack from happening and started thinking maybe he knew it was going to happen... Anyhow.. so very poignant!! Thank you for writing this and for sharing it with us!! Please keep up the most excellent work!!
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Reviewed By: nokomarie the snake On: June 30, 2006 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, very bloodily appropriate to Japanese sensibility. Poor Rin.
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