| "I'm Sorry" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: I have no idea
Reviewed By: kag_inu12012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea why I chose to do this, but that was an "ok" fic. v.v It might have been better if you had the song in the back ground or have Inuyasha sing it. That would have been a good idea I guess. Just hope you have good luck in you're future stories! ~kag_inu12012
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Title: I'm Sorry
Reviewed By: selene132 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so cute please continue :)
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Title: I'm Sorry
Reviewed By: selene132 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its was so cute
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Reviewed By: mikoyami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
you have a good story but you need to make it more real.inuyasha would have caught up to her and tried to apologize he would have grabbed her and beg her not to go if he truely loved her he would have showed more emotion to but getting to the well first he would try to figure a way to explain what happened between him and kikyo.if you add more arguing and begging and add a few sits here and there it would probably attract more people to read it and hopefully review your fic.but overall if you add more to it ill still read it...
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Wings_Of_Ice On: July 26, 2006 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UR STORY WAS AMAZING I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good Ideal for a story but its jst too short it needs to be longer like keep the begging and then got and hve kagome reamber her and inu getting married and when he proposed and jst so romantic times they had and befor kagome could jumo dow the well hve inu grab her arm and say let me explain and maby hve kagome sit him or summin. But it is a good story!
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Title: I'm Sorry
Reviewed By: Vegfan/Inufan On: July 17, 2006 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've rated thiis fic to tell you it had no meaning no love and above all no passion it disgust me and Inufans everywhere and lastly don't give up you just need a longer fic do what i do watch a bunch of movies or other anime shows for ideas Peace out cuddy.
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Reviewed By: Jezi futhark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
it is cute. i am a sucker for sweet make ups... just can't write them myself...
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Reviewed By: tashiana114 On: July 14, 2006 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is pretty good but i think that you need to make it a bit longer, so that it is more romantic. thats just what i think. but anyways it's a great story
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Title: NICE
Reviewed By: Kikyo10 On: July 06, 2006 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AWESOME! I'm seriouse. You need to keep writing or I'm gonna die! X . X This fic is so romantic and stuff... I love it.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, not one of your best works but it is good.
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