Title: FFRG
Reviewed By: staindgrey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 18:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
You really like the Bulma/Vegeta pairing, eh? Well, I'm sure you're sick of me reviewing your stuff, but I really like your style of writing. You get inside the mind of your character well, and the first-person point of view fits your style perfectly. Although, I have to say that, even though the song lyrics fit the story perfectly, I don't like how you just stuck them at the end like a sidenote. But that's just a personal preference. As always, good work. But, may I ask... could the next one be a little more... lengthy?
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