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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you know I will be there for it. I have no doubt you'll end it nicely. I love how Jackson is, hes such a calm and cool prick. I love how he gets her all riled up, thats the part I probably like the most. But I like how he lost his temper momentarily..and ow a kick to the jaw. Can't wait for more!
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Title: king
Reviewed By: KingSamuraiJack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well great chapter, i feel bad for lisa and hope that he wasnt lying about the thing about her not being pregnant ..... hope there is a light at the end of the tunnel.. :)
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I don't think this would break her completely. I am anxious to see how this story turns out.
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, he broke her. But in that case, who wouldn't be broken. Its all about sacrifice I suppose. I can't wait to see what you do next. Amazing as usual.
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Title: the king
Reviewed By: KingSamuraiJack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the choice ...... hmm it going to be a rough go for her b/c of the rape i cant wait to read the lemon oh the way she evades his sexual advances.... amazing as usual !!!
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Title: king
Reviewed By: KingSamuraiJack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic story i like the strong women deadly med thing you have going its great !!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh is he ever going to be mad when he walks in through the door with his place torn all apart. I can't wait to see what he has in store for her next. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I love this twist on the movie. I really enjoyed the movie and I find it fascinating. Is that it for this story or is there going to be more? If so Id love to read more of it.
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