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Reviewed By: Katie Ashleigh CY On: July 08, 2005 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The one thing that I like about this fanfiction is pretty much the whole thing...I'm not really sure how to explain it; I just like the way you say & explain things in the story. & the word key at the bottom with the author's note is really helpful for those of us that don't know Japnese! :) Hm, the one thing I didn't like....I'd guess it would have to be how you hinted in a previous chapter that Hiei had been controlled or abused by someone, but haven't really said anything else about it. You just kinda let it go, but you might be waiting to insert it in a later I don't know. But awsome fanfiction!! Please try to update soon, I know you're busy...
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Reviewed By: KatieAC On: July 08, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The one thing that I like about this fanfiction is pretty much the whole thing...I'm not really sure how to explain it; I just like the way you say & explain things in the story. & the word key at the bottom with the author's note is really helpful for those of us that don't know Japnese! :) Hm, the one thing I didn't like....I'd guess it would have to be how you hinted in a previous chapter that Hiei had been controlled or abused by someone, but haven't really said anything else about it. You just kinda let it go, but you might be waiting to insert it in a later I don't know. But awsome fanfiction!! Please try to update soon, I know you're busy...
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Reviewed By: myspiffynickname On: May 07, 2005 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I love this fic! I wish I could write like you... and I wish you would update, but you wrote the last chapter a year ago so it doesnt look like you're going to finish this fic... :( *cries*
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Reviewed By: WolvenJaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your fics. I love how it keeps me puzzled and wanting and anxious to keep on readin despite the length, I love your style. I was just shocked at he IwamotoXAkashi thing...... great twist! I can;t wait to see what the reason behind kurama being an ass is and getting to the yaoi. I'm really excited for the next update!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:53 CST
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aw! this is such a great fic! you really need to update, your fans must read more! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 17:18 CST
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Wow, your latest review was just last month! Okay, I absolutely adore your story. I like how you really have REASONS for how Hiei acts like he does. Like the Claustrophobia, I love that. I'm not sure there's much that I don't like because your story is dramatic and angasty which are two of my favorite things. The only thing I don't like is that you haven't updated in ages!!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 20:39 CST
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this is a really great fic, i love the way you portray hiei, i hope he'll get over the whole 'i want to die thing' though. ^_^ update soon! ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Resse [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the bobest story! i love the paring! i think that Hiei should kick Keiko's ass tho. not kill her...just kick her ass. can't wait for the updation. Holla!
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Reviewed By: ifergotagen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 21:24 CST
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oi....hahahaha i've been reaading ur fics because i heeeeard of them from chrissy sky....or sum1 with that name..heh ^^;;....BAI!
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: July 26, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you told reviewers to tell you one thing they liked and one thing they didn't like about the chapter. What I liked was everything, especially the yaoi. And what I didn't like was...this one's gonna take me a while to come up with, because you're a great writer even if you are still learning...but if I HAD to pick one thing I'd say it's Kurama being a jerk. I hate it when Kurama's a jerk. But that's about the only thing I had a problem with! My standards are way low so it takes a lot to disappoint me. And this isn't disappointing, so there you have it.
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Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved most of the stories you write, the charater personalities are great, the only problem I have with this, is that it's too short, but other then that I liked it. P.S: Kick those closed minded people's ass! You can be whatever you like! Anyways, I loved the story and hope you don't give up on it. Ja matte!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 03:45 CDT
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I was just going through some of your reviews and I suppose I should apologize with numerous others. We all know that reality has to take precedence, but none of us (including you) have to like it. Somewhere in one of your stories I've already said I think you're a wonderful writer and in case you don't believe it, how about a wonderful story-teller?! Having gone rounds with depression, it's not hard to see the firebaby going through one. Yusuke's reaction to caring for his friend however has been enlightening and ... difficult? at the same time. There hasn't been a lot about Kurama (aside from him "snitching" to Koenma) so this last chapter has me a little confused. Only because it seems that Kurama is having his own problem dealing with what's going on with Hiei. Ah well ^_^ Lessee, what I like about the story: It blends well. I like the details about what the characters are thinking so you can see why they do some of the things they do. What I don't like: Honestly, right now I can't think of anything. It's after 1:30 in the morning and I'm on meds. I like what I like and if there's a review there, I liked it well enough to tell the author so. If I think of something, I'll come back and let ya know, k?? :::hugs::: Whatever it is that's raining on you right now, it'll all work out, it always does. Just takes time.
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Reviewed By: Firefly XXX On: July 26, 2004 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I like your stories all of them. I love this story, but (no offense) I hate this chapter. It was boring, not very creative at all. I know you say, you are going throw a lot of shit right now, and I sorry, and I beat you are going to get a lot of people say "how good this is" but I must say, I think this was, no is the worst chapter I've ever read for you and I'm very disappointed, but I will always read your stories no matter how crappy they get. ~Ryo PS How's your novel Udjat's Reincarnate, is it? If you want to yell at me or say something to me you can reach me at Firefly_729@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Alexis-chan On: July 26, 2004 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok first off i just want to say i absolutly love this story and your a brilliant writter! Oh and now about the chapter! I love the how you have the characters in character! I also love how the story is coming out so far. And i truely honestly can really think of anything to say bad about this. I hope to see another chapter soon and i also understand that your life right now might be hetic so take your time.
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Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is really really good. write more! thankz!
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