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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 23:03 CST
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this is a great story, i hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh, this story deserves so much more reviews. I love it. Goodness, I started reading this about 3 years ago, I forgot the name...and recently I've gotten the urge to read the story again... Searched the whole site, I did. ^^ I re-read the WHOLE thing. Ahhhh. I gave the link to my friend as well, he loves it too. Just what I needed after being sick in bed for 2 weeks. *feeling happy* I love the way you portrayed the characters...and it's nice that Kurama isn't evil like I was beginning to think. Anyway, I won't rush ya to write the next chapter. Just write it as you please and I'll come read it when you do. ^^
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Reviewed By: chibilover01 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! You are amazing*bows down to you*. This Fanfic is great, I just love it!! :) It's amazing that you could write this and keep up with it for so long when you have school. All hail the mighty writer! I look forward to reading your other fics as well!
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 18:55 CDT
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Good job. Glad you finaly updated the fanfic. I love your story. Oh, please have them love it each other. I want Hiei to be happy. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good, a different take on Yu Yu Hakusho than I would have expected. While the updates are slow, shit happens in one's life; the fact that you're still writing at all is good enough, just continue the story to its natural conclusion (or as natural as you see it becoming, anyway). Anyway, its very good, and the style is simple, but orderly. Overall, I like the design of Hiei, he is a much more complex character than is given credit for. Not to mention that Yusuke is a fairly intelligent kid, just bullheaded, stubborn and lazy (traits seen in his ancestor and mom, afterall, heh). Like I said before, its a good series, keep up the good work.
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Title: Your story
Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey RoseThorn, I just wanted to say that I have been thoroughly enjoying this story so far and I hope that when real life gives you a chance that you can update it again in the future. It really is interesting. I love the dynamic between Yuusuke and Hiei and I feel bad for the little fire demon. ^_^ He's just so kawaii. And I love that Yukina knows that Hiei is her brother.Very nice. You defininitely have my interest peaked in this story. Keep your chin up and something will come your way. My prayers are with you. Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Chrislea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 14:21 CDT
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Great to see you writing again. ^~ I'm glad you finally have a bit of freedon... to torture Hiei~! XD
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so thrilled to see that you updated that I don't think I recognized it as your story's title at first. I remember that I favored it so I could come back to check on it so I was ecstatic to see that it had gotten an update, and an excellent one at that. I won't pester you for another one, I was overjoyed to have found this one at all, obviously! But I wanted to thank you very much and say that I look forward to another one if you happen to get around to it.
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Reviewed By: bluejay [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, I just read this fic. I read some of your others but didn't review because I wasn't logged in. I just want to say that this os one of the better fics I've seen and I really hope you continue it because I seriously want to know what happens. Now, you said you wanted detailed reviews so I'll give you one. Things I liked: I love how Yusuke is taking care of Hiei. It's really nice. And I love how this is mostly from Yusuke's POV. And I also like how Atsuko is being motherly(ish). Things I disliked: Normally I'd point out a bunch of flaws if I was specifically asked to but I couldn't find any with this fic. I'm not very happy with Kurama's behavior but you said there was a reason and I'll trust you on that because I have read some of your other work regarding Kurama. Here's to hoping you continue this fic, it's really good. Buut don't stress yourself out or anything. Happy writing.^^
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Reviewed By: Cero On: September 23, 2005 10:50 CDT
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I'm guessing you'll probably never update this again, which is really a disappointment because I'm really enjoying it. I got turned onto it through Enma's Torment Theater, and thought the issues being handled were an interesting idea. I love the characterization, though the plot's not yet resolved into a coherent shape and that's a pity. I hope this brightens your day, whenever you receive it.
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Reviewed By: Katie Ashleigh CY On: July 08, 2005 22:43 CDT
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The one thing that I like about this fanfiction is pretty much the whole thing...I'm not really sure how to explain it; I just like the way you say & explain things in the story. & the word key at the bottom with the author's note is really helpful for those of us that don't know Japnese! :) Hm, the one thing I didn't like....I'd guess it would have to be how you hinted in a previous chapter that Hiei had been controlled or abused by someone, but haven't really said anything else about it. You just kinda let it go, but you might be waiting to insert it in a later I don't know. But awsome fanfiction!! Please try to update soon, I know you're busy...
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Reviewed By: Katie Ashleigh CY On: July 08, 2005 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The one thing that I like about this fanfiction is pretty much the whole thing...I'm not really sure how to explain it; I just like the way you say & explain things in the story. & the word key at the bottom with the author's note is really helpful for those of us that don't know Japnese! :) Hm, the one thing I didn't like....I'd guess it would have to be how you hinted in a previous chapter that Hiei had been controlled or abused by someone, but haven't really said anything else about it. You just kinda let it go, but you might be waiting to insert it in a later I don't know. But awsome fanfiction!! Please try to update soon, I know you're busy...
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Reviewed By: Katie Ashleigh CY On: July 08, 2005 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The one thing that I like about this fanfiction is pretty much the whole thing...I'm not really sure how to explain it; I just like the way you say & explain things in the story. & the word key at the bottom with the author's note is really helpful for those of us that don't know Japnese! :) Hm, the one thing I didn't like....I'd guess it would have to be how you hinted in a previous chapter that Hiei had been controlled or abused by someone, but haven't really said anything else about it. You just kinda let it go, but you might be waiting to insert it in a later I don't know. But awsome fanfiction!! Please try to update soon, I know you're busy...
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Reviewed By: KatieAC On: July 08, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The one thing that I like about this fanfiction is pretty much the whole thing...I'm not really sure how to explain it; I just like the way you say & explain things in the story. & the word key at the bottom with the author's note is really helpful for those of us that don't know Japnese! :) Hm, the one thing I didn't like....I'd guess it would have to be how you hinted in a previous chapter that Hiei had been controlled or abused by someone, but haven't really said anything else about it. You just kinda let it go, but you might be waiting to insert it in a later I don't know. But awsome fanfiction!! Please try to update soon, I know you're busy...
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Title: dude
Reviewed By: myspiffynickname On: May 07, 2005 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I love this fic! I wish I could write like you... and I wish you would update, but you wrote the last chapter a year ago so it doesnt look like you're going to finish this fic... :( *cries*
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Reviewed By: WolvenJaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your fics. I love how it keeps me puzzled and wanting and anxious to keep on readin despite the length, I love your style. I was just shocked at he IwamotoXAkashi thing...... great twist! I can;t wait to see what the reason behind kurama being an ass is and getting to the yaoi. I'm really excited for the next update!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:53 CST
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aw! this is such a great fic! you really need to update, your fans must read more! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 17:18 CST
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Wow, your latest review was just last month! Okay, I absolutely adore your story. I like how you really have REASONS for how Hiei acts like he does. Like the Claustrophobia, I love that. I'm not sure there's much that I don't like because your story is dramatic and angasty which are two of my favorite things. The only thing I don't like is that you haven't updated in ages!!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 20:39 CST
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this is a really great fic, i love the way you portray hiei, i hope he'll get over the whole 'i want to die thing' though. ^_^ update soon! ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Resse [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the bobest story! i love the paring! i think that Hiei should kick Keiko's ass tho. not kill her...just kick her ass. can't wait for the updation. Holla!
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Reviewed By: ifergotagen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 21:24 CST
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oi....hahahaha i've been reaading ur fics because i heeeeard of them from chrissy sky....or sum1 with that name..heh ^^;;....BAI!
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: July 26, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you told reviewers to tell you one thing they liked and one thing they didn't like about the chapter. What I liked was everything, especially the yaoi. And what I didn't like was...this one's gonna take me a while to come up with, because you're a great writer even if you are still learning...but if I HAD to pick one thing I'd say it's Kurama being a jerk. I hate it when Kurama's a jerk. But that's about the only thing I had a problem with! My standards are way low so it takes a lot to disappoint me. And this isn't disappointing, so there you have it.
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Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved most of the stories you write, the charater personalities are great, the only problem I have with this, is that it's too short, but other then that I liked it. P.S: Kick those closed minded people's ass! You can be whatever you like! Anyways, I loved the story and hope you don't give up on it. Ja matte!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 03:45 CDT
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I was just going through some of your reviews and I suppose I should apologize with numerous others. We all know that reality has to take precedence, but none of us (including you) have to like it. Somewhere in one of your stories I've already said I think you're a wonderful writer and in case you don't believe it, how about a wonderful story-teller?! Having gone rounds with depression, it's not hard to see the firebaby going through one. Yusuke's reaction to caring for his friend however has been enlightening and ... difficult? at the same time. There hasn't been a lot about Kurama (aside from him "snitching" to Koenma) so this last chapter has me a little confused. Only because it seems that Kurama is having his own problem dealing with what's going on with Hiei. Ah well ^_^ Lessee, what I like about the story: It blends well. I like the details about what the characters are thinking so you can see why they do some of the things they do. What I don't like: Honestly, right now I can't think of anything. It's after 1:30 in the morning and I'm on meds. I like what I like and if there's a review there, I liked it well enough to tell the author so. If I think of something, I'll come back and let ya know, k?? :::hugs::: Whatever it is that's raining on you right now, it'll all work out, it always does. Just takes time.
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Reviewed By: Firefly XXX On: July 26, 2004 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I like your stories all of them. I love this story, but (no offense) I hate this chapter. It was boring, not very creative at all. I know you say, you are going throw a lot of shit right now, and I sorry, and I beat you are going to get a lot of people say "how good this is" but I must say, I think this was, no is the worst chapter I've ever read for you and I'm very disappointed, but I will always read your stories no matter how crappy they get. ~Ryo PS How's your novel Udjat's Reincarnate, is it? If you want to yell at me or say something to me you can reach me at Firefly_729@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Alexis-chan On: July 26, 2004 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok first off i just want to say i absolutly love this story and your a brilliant writter! Oh and now about the chapter! I love the how you have the characters in character! I also love how the story is coming out so far. And i truely honestly can really think of anything to say bad about this. I hope to see another chapter soon and i also understand that your life right now might be hetic so take your time.
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Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is really really good. write more! thankz!
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Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:00 CDT
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hey i had to stop reading at chapter 6 but i'll read the rest tomorrow. um...it's really great though. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: HieiLover#? On: July 03, 2004 06:28 CDT
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Hn. I could've sworn that I had reviewed before, but I couldn't find it.....ah, well, probably my computer messing up again. *shrugs* Anywho, I like your fic alot. Thanks for finally posting anpther chapter! I look forward to having even more to read soon. (hint, hint) Later!!!
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Reviewed By: enchanted_blood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Really enjoyed your fic, and absolutely ADORE your writing style! Half the people out here that write fanfics sound like second graders with their styles. Keep up the awesome work! Love the Hiei/Yuusuke setup, never read one with them together before. But then again, I haven't read that many YYH fanfics at all! lol
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