| "Suicide" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: Midnight Lilly On: June 12, 2003 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that woman is really strange, I hope she quits being such a drunk and becomes a good mother to those kids.
Drunk people suck terribly |
Reviewed By: An-dawg17 On: June 09, 2003 02:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm cool with Kurama/Hiei but it is nice to read Yuusuke/Hiei or Yuusuke/Kurama something like that!
Please keep it flowing! //@^_^@\\ |
Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Smiles hugely. I am so loving this fic. I really really want to see more of it and I feel so bad for Hiei. I have been reading this start to finish tonight. It is so good. Hope you had a Happy Birthday and look forward to the next chapter. . . ^_^ |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 14:41 CDT
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I like this so much! I don't think I've ever read a Yusuke/ Hiei fic before. Love it! |
Reviewed By: MidnightLoner On: April 26, 2003 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
...I don't know whether or not I should dislike Kurama and Koenma more than before or downright hate them...*groans* I have a headache...I hope you find enough time to update! I really want to find out what Hiei's problems are. |
Reviewed By: Elbereth in April [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 18:41 CST
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...not enough yu yu in world...feeling withdrawl...please, please write more soon... |
Reviewed By: Bejipan On: March 14, 2003 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and write the 9th chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next! Are you really going to skip to Monday? Could you have at least a little paragraph about Sunday then, please? Also, keep up with the angst and if there is going to be a happy ending, don't make it too happy ok? At least let Hiei still be his old self (but just not debating suicide).
Bejipan |
Reviewed By: Bejipan On: March 14, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and write the 9th chapture, I can't wait to see what happens next! Are you really going to skip to Monday? Could you have at least a little paragraph about Sunday then, please? Also, keep up with the angst and if there is going to be a happy ending, don't make it too happy ok? At least let Hiei still be his old self (but just not debating suicide).
Bejipan |
Reviewed By: Elbereth in April [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. Keep going! I am anxious to see how Hiei deals with school. I foresee trouble. I hope Yusuke and Keiko look out for him. I hope he learns how to be happy. It's hard to do when you've been depressed for too long. He needs to talk to the guidance counselor. Have they considered antidepressants? He needs to be made to feel loved!
When the teachers ask him what he wants to be when he grows up, what will he say? Will Yusuke's bad reputation cling to him? I have a lot of questions, don't I? He's going to attract his own share of girls. There's something about that wrong kind of guy. He needs a woman who is intelligent and understanding. Um,,,I'm rambling now, aren't I?
Just keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Christine-chan On: March 02, 2003 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before this is one hell of a fic! But u take to long between chappies. And the chapters r to short. Short but really REALLY good! Write more. |
Reviewed By: Sakura02 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 21:11 CST
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*thumbs up* Short, but great as always! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi Christine-Chan On: February 03, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! I love YuskuexHiei pairings but my #1 fave is HieixKurama pairings! But I basically love ne thin' Hiei!!!
Inugome:Please, don't get her started!
Chibi: SHUDDUP!! DOG GIRL!! sorry,that's Inuyasha's daughter(I made her up!! Don't steal her!!) |
Reviewed By: Dark of Sky On: February 01, 2003 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I must say that "Enjoyment Factor" was more of a 12-13-14. your writing style is encredible and I am practically liveing infront of my computer to see when you'll update next! please hurry and continue! ^_^ *begins to babble about the goodness of Yusuke/Hiei fics* |
Reviewed By: Sakura02 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 22:27 CST
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Great works, as always! I just love angst...Mmm |
Reviewed By: yyhlover On: June 16, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome plot and writing!! Please update soon, cause I'm leaving to spend the summer with my dad, and he doesnt believe in computers!!If its possible, could you send the new chappie to Monkeywarrior234@aol.com |
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