| "Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE VERY NICE.
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Reviewed By: abyssinian_assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 17:19 CDT
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I don't generally write reviews for fanfics on MM.org... I don't usually even come to this site. I did love the fic however, fluffy without making me choke lol. I just wanted to say though that I thought it was awesome, your note at the bottom about condom use. Most authors don't think of it, but way to go!
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Reviewed By: Kamryn On: August 16, 2006 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic and I hope you write more. The part that had me laughing was Yoji dropping to his knees and and giving thanks for the naked Aya in his bed LOL! I'm also glad that Yoji cleared up the misundertanding between them. I've read so much angst lately, so I really needed that. There was great pacing and I had no problem realizing whose POV it was. Good job. Thanks for sharing this story with us!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan not signed in On: July 03, 2006 17:30 CDT
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ooooh that was good
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 09:28 CDT
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mmm...lemon...very nice! Keep writing.
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