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| "On Top" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 03:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
the review button will be shot if it doesn't stop being annoying. Heh. Love the story, just wish there was some smut to go with the inuendo. Write some more, ja ne.
| Title: Yaay!
Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good. But does it have to be a one shot? I think you should turn it into something more, how much fun would it be to write? Lol. I'd really love it to be more than a one shot!
| Title: Thankies ^__^
Reviewed By: Miss Shepherdess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 12:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a fun piece! ^__^ I especially likied it how the guys managed to stay guys, and teenagers and everything... J.
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