Reviewed By: _Raina_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ended kinda short, but was really good. you shouldn't have made it a oneshot since it was that interesting, and talking about sex is not my fav thing in the world. but your story kept me ammused
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