| "Return of the Bijus" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: NAME!
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 17:03 CDT
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Yo, here is a name for ya. Kinshirabi xD took me a whole freakin week 0o
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 21:43 CDT
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uh, the third and Genko Hayate died. the third's funneral was ep 80 i think. Genko Hayate was killed by Kabuto. you left your address on the internet? i find it amusing too on how you get the notes... i would have just told them give me reviews if you are so eager to find out.
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a whlie since I last reviewed. As always your story comes out on top!! Update soon!! I love this fic!!!
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to "Bellatrix "Vecours" I'm not trying to be a suck-up or anything but I really love this story. "The Judge" "Raman man" "Dancing wind" "ERO-DEMON" and "White-Knight" love this story too so UPDATE for us please.
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Reviewed By: Bellatrix Vecours On: July 31, 2006 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darling Specula, Are you on the rag or something? You messeged me, saying that i shouldn't talk about your grammar. Well darling, i though that was what reviews were for. I didn't intend to hurt your obviously fragile feelings. You also stated that i can't possibly understand because i do not write. And you are wrong in that assumption, i simply have more then 1 penname. I beta 4 stories as well and spend plenty of time doing grammar checks a day. Take my review for what it is, constructive critiscm. Maybe you don't see it much, but there it is.
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 26, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll Check everyday for a new chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will check every so often to see if you've updated the story. And in case your wondering the answer is yes it is THAT DAMN GOOD!!!
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Title: The Master
Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! YOU ARE A TRUE GENIUS FOR COMING UP WITH THIS STORY!!! And for what it's worth I already read " A tail of two Bijuus" before I read this!!!
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Reviewed By: White-Knight On: July 23, 2006 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Story is AWESOME!!!!! Please UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ERO-DEMON On: July 22, 2006 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU GOT TO UPDATE THIS!!!!! I MEAN YOU FINISHED "A TAIL OF TWO BIJUS". PLAESE UPDATE "RETURN OF TWO BIJUS" I REALLY WANT TWO FINISH READING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dancing wind On: July 22, 2006 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Story Kicks ASS!!!!!! Please UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 22, 2006 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH!!! Thank you!!! You are truly a GOD OF THE STORIES!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope u update this soon because this is a great story. I hope u have the "snake bastard" die soon.
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 18, 2006 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the SHIT!!!!!!!!!! YOU MUST FINISH THIS I READ THE FIRST ONE BUT THE SECOUND ONE IS EVEN BETTER!!!!!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, an author who chews the dummies. the thing with Yondaime was because he was so good at it and that was it. i am thankful to find an author who knows what the series is like. keep up the very good work and keep chewin this sobs out because they dont realize when they do stupid things. i understand how hard it is to write these stories because i do for friends as request and as something to do. i know i havent put anything up on here besides a few favorites, but i can tell u will be an author that i look for in the future for incredible stories.
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